sábado, 23 de janeiro de 2010

Fire of Eyes

too much tired for fight
too much lonely for stay
in a fate it always wanna say
a great deal of words in a sight

with a scissor, i cut all that i bounded
mainly what was bonding me and you
with fire, i burned all that i founded
actually nothing would be the same like we used to do

by now, i cry in this crowd of smiles
the same way you left me wait
all that left to me was this files
that i'll throw away with my fate.

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  1. ''(...)all that left to me was this files
    that i'll throw away with my fate.''

    The intensiveness of the grief expressed on these final two lines resumes the whole poem.

    I wonder where you get all that inspiration. Just hope you haven't gone through any real experience as expressed.

    Wonderfully written, Mellanie.
    Precious stuff. Do you keep a journal? As in diary.

    Memories are too important to be forgotten.

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  2. Mellanie sempre fantástica, em qualquer lingua.

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  3. Very Good. Impreciona-me a cada dia rarÔ! *-* love you!

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